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Confusion running around
Surrounding me
Engulfing an already confused girl
You say you love me
You say I’m beautiful
Too pretty to cry
But how do you know?
Why do you love me?
You know nothing about me
Secrets are kept from you
Kept from everyone
Beautiful you say?
I stand and doubt that
I am yet the opposite
No beauty comes from me
Only a normal looking girl
Misery like waves from me
Too pretty to cry you say?
That must be a lie
Seeing how I cry so often
It’s a miracle my eyes haven't dried
Confusion running around
Engulfing a confused girl
Love you say?
Lust sounds more like it
©2009 ~KillerSaya
:iconkillersaya:

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:iconsaiai-kanshisha:
the only thing i have to say about this alpha. Is that perhaps theres no reason that someone loves you. Perhaps they just do. If you think about it logically i doubt anyone could be judged to be the prettiest person in the world or the wisest. Because there has been to many to choose from and each person is prettier to one individual than to another. People just love because they were made to love. They were made to hate some and made to love some so that they could find there own balance. So they could balance the world. But i do know that love is attractive. Someway somehow you will find those who love you. It may not be today or tomarrow, but thats just the whole suckish trial of life. To be happy you must go through pain. I dont understand it myself, but it seems that its true. Those who recieve the most pain and stay true end up the happiest. You ask yourself how people can love you when they dont know all the secrets that make you so horrid, but perhaps thats cause. Everyone needs love and too love. And EVERYONE has inner secrets that no one knows or that should know. Its not what you bottle up inside that makes you you,but what you show to the world.

For example if a poor guy had a great idea that could cure cancer and save the world ,what would happen if he didnt share it? He would die of hunger and others would die from sickness. That would make him a evil person just because he bottled up the good inside of him and only showed the world the poor side. However if he told the world of his idea than not only could he become rich, but he would save many lives.


I dont know if what i said helped at all... or even if you could understand it... but let me know ^^ :hug:
:iconkillersaya:
I understand it, I just don't see how that goes along with what I wrote and feel.

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“Just think how happy you would be if you lost everything you have right now, and then got it back again.” ~Frances Rodman
:iconsaiai-kanshisha:
eh... maybe its just what i think when im like that... *sighs* sorry im useless. Basically im saying. I know your confused now but in the end it will all be fine...
:iconkillersaya:
My God you're not useless, geesh so stop saying you are

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“Just think how happy you would be if you lost everything you have right now, and then got it back again.” ~Frances Rodman
:iconkillersaya:
I just don't need anyone else putting themselves down at the moment, I really won't be able to handle it.

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“Just think how happy you would be if you lost everything you have right now, and then got it back again.” ~Frances Rodman
:iconthunderdemonraiju:
Good poem. As for your questions there are no answers. Reason and infatuation have never lived in the same place. Try not to e too judgmental, but nonetheless keep your eyes open.

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There's someone in my head, and it's not me.
:iconkillersaya:
Thanks

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“Just think how happy you would be if you lost everything you have right now, and then got it back again.” ~Frances Rodman

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